Could you give me some feedback on my poem please 
?
The Artist
Paint the lips from which I speak
Draw the eyes from which I seek
Pastel the nose from which I smell
Color the skin within my shell
Cut out the ears so I can hear
Stencil my feelings loud and clear
Craft my hands to touch and feel
Make my mind as strong as steel
Mold my heart and mold it strong
For many people will do it wrong
Now wrap me up and ship me back
You have supplied me with what I lack
your verse in good, you are asking somebody to make you whole, it maybe your creator, your lover or your family. nice piece
How to Make a Felt Flower Pin
